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Message de mimosa23 posté le 03-01-2010 à 17:41:54 (S | E | F)
bonjour à tous pourriez vous me corriger ce paragraphe s'il vous plaît? merci.
( if children are untaught their ignorance and vices Will in the future fife cost us much dearer in theier consequences Than it would do in their correction by a good education )
This quote was giving by Thomas Jefferson ,the second american president a good education requires certain criteria regarding behqviour at code : a school uniform , a good edication environement as well as a good educational as a matter afact good and appropiriat school rules make te nernurs know were their limits end . They will adopt good respectful behaiviour to both their teatchers and their pears . One ther craiternion for a good education is a school uniform . This will enable the lerner to devote more time to his studies then to his fashion tastes it will also reduse show off and bullying these students will be leaders of tomorrow they will be our future teachers, doctors, nurses, lawyer and may be even our prime minister what ever.
Message de mimosa23 posté le 03-01-2010 à 17:41:54 (S | E | F)
bonjour à tous pourriez vous me corriger ce paragraphe s'il vous plaît? merci.
( if children are untaught their ignorance and vices Will in the future fife cost us much dearer in theier consequences Than it would do in their correction by a good education )
This quote was giving by Thomas Jefferson ,the second american president a good education requires certain criteria regarding behqviour at code : a school uniform , a good edication environement as well as a good educational as a matter afact good and appropiriat school rules make te nernurs know were their limits end . They will adopt good respectful behaiviour to both their teatchers and their pears . One ther craiternion for a good education is a school uniform . This will enable the lerner to devote more time to his studies then to his fashion tastes it will also reduse show off and bullying these students will be leaders of tomorrow they will be our future teachers, doctors, nurses, lawyer and may be even our prime minister what ever.
Réponse: Correction de gerondif, postée le 03-01-2010 à 18:13:51 (S | E)
bonsoir,
vous avez dû taper sur un clavier qwerty....
( if children are untaught, their ignorance and vices will in the (their??)future life cost us much dearer in their consequences than it would do in their correction by a good education )(Avez-vous traduit cette citation dont le style parait assez maladroit pour Jefferson ?)
This quote was giving(participe passé: give/gave/given) by Thomas Jefferson ,the second american(majuscule) president. A good education requires certain criteria regarding behaviour at(??) code : a school uniform , a good education environment as well as a good educational(?? adjectif tout seul) as a matter of fact good and appropiriat(orthographe) school rules make the nernurs(???? learners ? children ?) know were their limits end . They will adopt good respectful behaiviour to both their teatchers and their pears (des poires !! pour dires leurs pairs, ce sont deux autres voyelles derrière le p). One of ther craiternion (orthographe)for a good education is a school uniform . This will enable the lerner(orthographe) to devote more time to his studies then(erreur dans ce complément du comparatif) to his fashion tastes. It will also reduse show off and bullying. These students will be leaders of tomorrow they will be our future teachers, doctors, nurses, lawyers and maybe even our prime minister what ever(pour dire également: as well.)
(majuscules à ce titre de Premier Ministre peut-être)
Réponse: Correction de mimosa23, postée le 03-01-2010 à 20:23:26 (S | E)
bonsoir gérondif, merci pour votre aide.
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