Does it 'sound ' English? (1)

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Does it 'sound ' English?
Message from ffrraamm posted on 22-02-2009 at 13:32:01
Hi everyone,

The sentence mentioned in the title is :
" This project enables me to put into practice the theoretical approach of optical I had learned at the intensive undergraduate preparation course. "

Does it sounds "native" to you ?

Thanks a lot

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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-02-2009 13:42
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Edited by bridg on 06-03-2009 15:06

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Re: Does it 'sound ' English? by chrislondon, posted on 23-02-2009 at 21:00:46
Hi,
I'm not sure what you mean by 'optical' in this context. It's an adjective. I think you need a noun. I would use the preposition 'on' in the phrase: 'on the intensive undergraduate preparation course.'
Best Wishes,

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Re: Does it 'sound ' English? by ffrraamm, posted on 23-02-2009 at 21:45:45
Hi,

Thanks for your answer Chris. I think optics is the noun I needed. I will use 'on' as you say.

Thanks

Fram

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Re: Does it 'sound ' English? by jonquille, posted on 24-02-2009 at 00:40:39
"...on the ...course?".... Personally, I think "at" was ok. You could also use "in" or "during."

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Re: Does it 'sound ' English? by sunliming, posted on 06-03-2009 at 13:09:46
Hi,

i agree with you guys, personally, i prefer the second pen pal's explanation.

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