Let's suggest 84- Taking it easy 30

Let's suggest 84- Taking it easy 30
Message de here4u posté le 14-04-2025 à 22:48:25 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!

Another easy exercice that everyone can do!

Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...

Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement. ) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :

1) Tell us about an encounter that has changed your life.

2) Who is the person (dead or alive!) that you admire most?

3)What is your idea of 'a great holiday'?

4) What do you do when you have 'nothing to do'?

Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois la première réponse corrigée au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le samedi 26 avril 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 84- Taking it easy 30 de here4u, postée le 15-04-2025 à 22:33:41 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Grand désert sur le site, et le Forum... Un réponse, quand même, que je vous livre !

ANSWER A: topic 4: please indicate possible mistakes, and underline what looks clumsy to you.

My idea of a 'GREAT holiday' is very simple; where we are is not important, just outside of big cities and especially together.
i like to have my close family living with us: grandparents, parents and grankids, uncles and aunts if possible. We need a large accomodation where each unit of the family has a room, and where cousins can be together. We stay in the middle of woods or in the countryside, with no noise or trafic jams... We have time, we take the time to talk and play boards games, to take long walks and go cycling. We don't watch TV, but invent games where each generation have fun equally; we sing, we cook together, but mostly, we reconnect. I love these moments an we all look forward them.

for your help!

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Réponse : Let's suggest 84- Taking it easy 30 de here4u, postée le 16-04-2025 à 22:12:43 (S | E)
Nobody to help?
Pleaaaaase…

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Réponse : Let's suggest 84- Taking it easy 30 de here4u, postée le 18-04-2025 à 16:22:15 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Grand désert sur le site, et le Forum... Un réponse, quand même, que je vous livre !

ANSWER A: topic 4:my indications and green allowed.

My idea of a 'GREAT holiday' is very simple; where we are is not important, just outside of big cities and especially together.
i like to have my close family living with us: grandparents, parents and grankids, uncles and aunts if possible. We need a large accomodation where each unit of the family has a room, and where cousins can be together. We stay in the middle of woods or in the countryside, with no noise or trafic jams... We have time, we take the time to talk and play boards games, to take long walks and go cycling. We don't watch TV, but invent games where each generation have fun equally; we sing, we cook together, but mostly, we reconnect. I love these moments an we all look forward them.

Très bonne expression.

Thanks for your help.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 84- Taking it easy 30 de gerold, postée le 19-04-2025 à 00:01:51 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER A: topic 4:my indications and green allowed.

My idea of a 'GREAT holiday' is very simple; the place where we are is not important, it must only be just outside (of) big cities* and above all, we must be especially together.
i I like to have my close family living with us: grandparents, parents and grandkids, uncles and aunts if possible. We need a large accomodation (uncountable) where each unit member? of the family has a room, and where cousins can be together. We stay in the middle of woods or in the countryside, with no noise or traffic jams... We have time, we take the time to talk and play boards (no -s) games, to take long walks and go cycling. We don't watch TV, but invent games where each generation have has fun equally (rather : all generations have fun equally); we sing, we cook together, but mostly, we reconnect. I love these moments and we all look forward to living them.

Très bonne expression.

* "Just outside big cities" would mean "close to, but not in big cities", if think it was not the writer's intent.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 84- Taking it easy 30 de here4u, postée le 19-04-2025 à 07:50:38 (S | E)
Hello gerold!

Thanks for your suggestions!

ANSWER A: topic 4: gerold's suggestions and my further indications.

My idea of a 'GREAT holiday' is very simple; the place where we are is not important, it must only be just outside (of) big cities* and above all, we must be especially together.
i I like to have my close family living with us: grandparents, parents and grandkids, uncles and aunts if possible. We need a large accomodation (uncountable-oui, mais il se trouve parfois avec article et partitif)) where each unit member?(I suppose the author meant 'couple'...?) of the family has a room, and where cousins can be together. We stay in the middle of woods or in the countryside, with no noise or traffic jams... We have time, we take the time to talk and play boards (no -s) games, to take long walks and go cycling. We don't watch TV, but invent games where each generation have has fun equally (rather : all generations have fun equally); we sing, we cook together, but mostly, we reconnect. I love these moments and we all look forward to living them.

Très bonne expression.Très bonnes corrections !

* "Just outside big cities" would mean "close to, but not in big cities", if think it was not the writer's intent.(sure, but why not? the author may not appreciate long hours of transportation; In your opinion, what did the author mean?

Thanks for everything!

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Réponse : Let's suggest 84- Taking it easy 30 de here4u, postée le 19-04-2025 à 21:49:15 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Here is ANSWER B: topic 4: What do you do when you have 'nothing to do'?

That is a strange question ... I have never nothing to do ... On times, when I am not in work, in my office with my work mates,
I have not always a lot to do. In my work I speak with my friends, I drink coffee and we go back to work ...
Out of work I do sports three times by week, an hour all the time. When I am in home, I look at TV, listens to news and follows sport: specially football. I don't play football now because I've hurt my knee when I was forteen and had to reeducate my leg. Looking at matches is away for compensating my blessing ... I dream that I am one of the foofball stars and I'm happy. 124 mots.

Please, help the author indicating mistakes and underlining what looks clumsy to you.

for your help!

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Réponse : Let's suggest 84- Taking it easy 30 de gerold, postée le 20-04-2025 à 09:13:25 (S | E)
Hello!

Here is ANSWER B: topic 4: What do you do when you have 'nothing to do'?

That is a strange question ... I have never nothing to do ... On times, when I am not in work, in my office with my work mates,
I have not always (not coherent with the beginning of the sentence) a lot to do. In my work I speak with my friends, I drink coffee and we go back to work ...
Out of work (meaning) I do sports three times by week, an hour all the time. When I am in home, I look at TV, listens to news and follows sport: specially (? not sure)football. I don't play football now because I've hurt my knee when I was forteen and had to reeducate my leg. Looking at matches is away for compensating my blessing ... I dream that I am one of the foofball stars and I'm happy. 124 mots.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 84- Taking it easy 30 de gerold, postée le 20-04-2025 à 14:40:28 (S | E)
Hello dear here4u!

* "Just outside big cities" would mean "close to, but not in big cities", if think it was not the writer's intent.(sure, but why not? the author may not appreciate long hours of transportation; In your opinion, what did the author mean?

Maybe the author used "just" with the meaning of "only" : the place where we are is not important, it should only/just be outside big cities, not necessarily "just outside" ...

And "the middle of woods" is definitely far outside big cities (I think the author doesn't mean the Bois de Boulogne .


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Modifié par gerold le 20-04-2025 15:13

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