Correction/exposé 2
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Message de lesentier posté le 04-04-2021 à 15:10:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Si quelqu'un veut bien me le corriger, ce sera très gentil de sa part
"To do our charity persist, we must communicate!
That begin by the presence of partners, not hallmarks but public faces. We will speak with locals councils. And, because children today are adults for tomorrow, we will take contact with teachers. We haven't pretentious to be able to want make session of sensibilization school children' faces. On the over and, teachers will can informats parents by our charity.
[une de mes camarades] said before, that collection-points will be placed in school, secondary school and high school around.
Publicity is so played by littles flyers we will leave in several places: libraries, village halls, shops...etc. Finally, we will so contactable by social networks!"
Merci d'avance et bonne journée
Message de lesentier posté le 04-04-2021 à 15:10:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Si quelqu'un veut bien me le corriger, ce sera très gentil de sa part
"To do our charity persist, we must communicate!
That begin by the presence of partners, not hallmarks but public faces. We will speak with locals councils. And, because children today are adults for tomorrow, we will take contact with teachers. We haven't pretentious to be able to want make session of sensibilization school children' faces. On the over and, teachers will can informats parents by our charity.
[une de mes camarades] said before, that collection-points will be placed in school, secondary school and high school around.
Publicity is so played by littles flyers we will leave in several places: libraries, village halls, shops...etc. Finally, we will so contactable by social networks!"
Merci d'avance et bonne journée
Réponse : Correction/exposé 2 de laure95, postée le 05-04-2021 à 11:03:52 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- That begin (faute de conjugaison)by the presence of partners,
- locals (pas de s à un adjectif) councils.
- And (à éviter en début de phrase + ne pas mettre de virgule après),
- because children today are (article) adults for (pas la bonne préposition)tomorrow,
- We haven't pretentious: nous n'avons pas prétentieux?
- to want (préposition) make session (pluriel)of sensibilization school children' faces
. - On the over and: ?
- teachers will can informats (orthographe): choisir entre will et can (on ne peut pas mettre 2 auxiliaires modaux à la suite) parents by our charity.
- in school, secondary school and high school around: mettre tous ces mots au pluriel.
Publicity is so played
by littles (little ne prend pas de s)flyers we will leave in (enlever in)several places- Finally, we will (où est le verbeN) so contactable by social networks!"
Réponse : Correction/exposé 2 de gerold, postée le 05-04-2021 à 18:43:11 (S | E)
Bonjour
To do our charity persist, we must communicate!
"to do" ne s'emploie jamais au sens de "faire faire". Dites cela autrement : "... pour que (so that) notre association continue d'exister."
Réponse : Correction/exposé 2 de lesentier, postée le 06-04-2021 à 15:07:58 (S | E)
Merci à tous pour vos conseils! Bonne journée
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