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Message de yasemin posté le 09-02-2021 à 22:30:59 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'ai un oral à passer en anglais. Est-ce que vous pouvez vérifier si j'ai fait des fautes s'il vous plaît?
Je vous remercie pour vos réponses.
Good morning everyone ! Thank you for having me. Today I am going to tell you about myself. Well, my name is X, I am 22 years old. I graduated with my highscool diploma with a concentration in Sciences in June 2016. Currently, I am an underground student in Psychlogy at the University of Nimes in the South-East of France, in Provence. I will graduate with my bachelor’s degree next year in June 2022. After I get my undergraduate degree, I would like to go on and get a master’s degree in clinical psychology.
Off-campus, I am involved in many activities that I really enjoy. I have been playing basketball for four years. I am also enrolled in an English language course in order to improve my English-language skills.
I can describe myself as a person who like to help people. In fact, I take great pleasure in comforting people around me when they are not feeling well, I like to listen them and find solutions to their problems. So, in the future, I can see myself working as a clinical psychologist to help patients with bahavioral and mental health issues. In my opinion, the qualities required to be psychologist are patience, adaptability and empathy.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-02-2021 22:36
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Message de yasemin posté le 09-02-2021 à 22:30:59 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'ai un oral à passer en anglais. Est-ce que vous pouvez vérifier si j'ai fait des fautes s'il vous plaît?
Je vous remercie pour vos réponses.
Good morning everyone ! Thank you for having me. Today I am going to tell you about myself. Well, my name is X, I am 22 years old. I graduated with my highscool diploma with a concentration in Sciences in June 2016. Currently, I am an underground student in Psychlogy at the University of Nimes in the South-East of France, in Provence. I will graduate with my bachelor’s degree next year in June 2022. After I get my undergraduate degree, I would like to go on and get a master’s degree in clinical psychology.
Off-campus, I am involved in many activities that I really enjoy. I have been playing basketball for four years. I am also enrolled in an English language course in order to improve my English-language skills.
I can describe myself as a person who like to help people. In fact, I take great pleasure in comforting people around me when they are not feeling well, I like to listen them and find solutions to their problems. So, in the future, I can see myself working as a clinical psychologist to help patients with bahavioral and mental health issues. In my opinion, the qualities required to be psychologist are patience, adaptability and empathy.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-02-2021 22:36
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Réponse : Besoin/correction de gerondif, postée le 10-02-2021 à 16:02:50 (S | E)
Bonjour
Erreurs en bleu.
Good morning everyone ! Thank you for having me. Today I am going to tell you about myself. Well, my name is X, I am 22 years old. I graduated with my highschool diploma with a concentration in Sciences in June 2016 (vous tentez de traduire bac option Sciences ? I took my A' levels in 2016, majoring in Science). Currently, I am an underground ( vous devez confondre undergraduate et underground, souterrain. Je sais bien qu'il y a le confinement mais si je vous imagine tel Charles Bronson creusant un souterrain, un tunnel pour rejoindre l'amphithéatre, c'est bientôt moi dont on va examiner les behavioral and mental health issues.) student in Psychlogy at the University of Nimes in the South-East of France, in Provence. I will graduate with take my bachelor’s degree next year in June 2022. After I get my undergraduate degree, I would like to go on and get a master’s degree in clinical psychology.
Off-campus, I am involved in many activities that I really enjoy. I have been playing basketball for four years. I am also enrolled in an English language course in order to improve my English-language skills.
I can describe myself as a person who likes to help people. In fact, I take great pleasure in comforting people around me when they are not feeling well, I like to listen to them and find solutions to their problems. So, in the future, I can see myself working as a clinical psychologist to help patients with behavioral and mental health issues. In my opinion, the qualities required to be a psychologist are patience, adaptability and empathy.
Je suis médecin = I am a doctor. Article indéfini devant les noms de métiers.
Réponse : Besoin/correction de yasemin, postée le 10-02-2021 à 20:11:39 (S | E)
Je vous remercie beaucoup pour votre réponse.
Aussi, est ce que vous pourriez me dire laquelle de ces phrases est la plus correcte :
Finally, I would like to talk about what I am doing off-campus
OU Finally, I would like to talk about what I do off-campus ?
Réponse : Besoin/correction de gerondif, postée le 10-02-2021 à 23:42:05 (S | E)
Bonsoir
Les deux se disent :
Finally, I would like to talk about what I am doing off-campus,vous voulez parler en n'ayant pas l'air d'y attacher trop d'importance de ce que vous faites habituellement hors campus, après le travail.
Finally, I would like to talk about what I (usually) do off-campus . Façon normale de le dire, plus habituelle, plus conforme à la grammaire classique.
Réponse : Besoin/correction de yasemin, postée le 12-02-2021 à 23:03:29 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup gerondif pour toutes vos réponses ! Passez une très belle journée !
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