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Message de bbbbbbbb posté le 30-01-2021 à 19:54:55 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je souhaiterais partir en Erasmus en Italie ou au Portugual l'année prochaine et pour cela je doid réaliser une lettre de motivation en anglais mais le problème c'est que je n'ai pas fait d'anglais depuis le lycée.
Si vous pouviez m'aider à corriger les fautes ce serait super.
Merci mille fois d'avance
En Anglais:
Subject: Application for an academic semester at the University of Dentistry of xxx
Madam, Sir,
Being currently in my 5th year of dental surgery at the University of Nantes, I would like for the year 2021/2022 to join the University of Dentistry of Rome in order to complete an academic semester there thanks to the Erasmus program. Therefore, I have decided to put together an international mobility file in order to take advantage of this opportunity.
Thanks to the Erasmus program and the course offered at the University of Dentistry in Rome, I could both improve my knowledge of English, discover a new culture and a new approach to patient care and the realization of different treatments.
For many years, I have travelled in England, as well as in the United States and many other countries. Travelling is for me a source of escape and dreams. Thus by realizing this Erasmus, it would be possible for me to combine two very important sides of my life which are my studies and my thirst for travel and discoveries. Spain has proven to be a rich country, both in its culture and monuments and in its people. My stays have always been quite short, so I haven't had the opportunity to immerse myself completely. This semester will be an unprecedented opportunity for me.
During my high school studies, I have acquired a B1 level in English which I try to maintain regularly by talking with friends studying in London and watching English series.
I am rigorous, serious, curious and sociable, always ready to take on new challenges and to invest myself totally in them. Participating in this Erasmus program would be a real opportunity for me, professionally, culturally, socially and personally.
Thank you for your attention to my application. I remain at your disposal for any further information and to meet you for an interview.
Please accept, Madam, Sir, the expression of my sincere greetings.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-01-2021 20:28
Gris; texte en français inutile à ce stade; on vous demandera des explications si on ne comprend pas.
Message de bbbbbbbb posté le 30-01-2021 à 19:54:55 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je souhaiterais partir en Erasmus en Italie ou au Portugual l'année prochaine et pour cela je doid réaliser une lettre de motivation en anglais mais le problème c'est que je n'ai pas fait d'anglais depuis le lycée.
Si vous pouviez m'aider à corriger les fautes ce serait super.
Merci mille fois d'avance
En Anglais:
Subject: Application for an academic semester at the University of Dentistry of xxx
Madam, Sir,
Being currently in my 5th year of dental surgery at the University of Nantes, I would like for the year 2021/2022 to join the University of Dentistry of Rome in order to complete an academic semester there thanks to the Erasmus program. Therefore, I have decided to put together an international mobility file in order to take advantage of this opportunity.
Thanks to the Erasmus program and the course offered at the University of Dentistry in Rome, I could both improve my knowledge of English, discover a new culture and a new approach to patient care and the realization of different treatments.
For many years, I have travelled in England, as well as in the United States and many other countries. Travelling is for me a source of escape and dreams. Thus by realizing this Erasmus, it would be possible for me to combine two very important sides of my life which are my studies and my thirst for travel and discoveries. Spain has proven to be a rich country, both in its culture and monuments and in its people. My stays have always been quite short, so I haven't had the opportunity to immerse myself completely. This semester will be an unprecedented opportunity for me.
During my high school studies, I have acquired a B1 level in English which I try to maintain regularly by talking with friends studying in London and watching English series.
I am rigorous, serious, curious and sociable, always ready to take on new challenges and to invest myself totally in them. Participating in this Erasmus program would be a real opportunity for me, professionally, culturally, socially and personally.
Thank you for your attention to my application. I remain at your disposal for any further information and to meet you for an interview.
Please accept, Madam, Sir, the expression of my sincere greetings.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-01-2021 20:28
Gris; texte en français inutile à ce stade; on vous demandera des explications si on ne comprend pas.
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