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Message de fannyb posté le 30-09-2019 à 20:03:48 (S | E | F)
Hello !
Je dois rédiger un petit texte pour répondre à cette question:
How have families changed since 1945 ?
Et voilà ce que j’ai fait —> Pouvez-vous, s’il vous plaît, m’indiquer si j’ai fait des erreurs ?
Families who changed since 1945, are shocked by the war. So the Unated Nation was creat and after the European Union was creat for have peace. Next, the new technologies appear, for instance the Mobil phone.
So all this has made that families changed. The situation of women in society have changed, now there are not only house wife, but also house husbands. The people are more open minded. Homosexuals can now get married. So today there are families of homosexuals. It’s great !
Merci d’avance
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-09-2019 20:29
Message de fannyb posté le 30-09-2019 à 20:03:48 (S | E | F)
Hello !
Je dois rédiger un petit texte pour répondre à cette question:
How have families changed since 1945 ?
Et voilà ce que j’ai fait —> Pouvez-vous, s’il vous plaît, m’indiquer si j’ai fait des erreurs ?
Families who changed since 1945, are shocked by the war. So the Unated Nation was creat and after the European Union was creat for have peace. Next, the new technologies appear, for instance the Mobil phone.
So all this has made that families changed. The situation of women in society have changed, now there are not only house wife, but also house husbands. The people are more open minded. Homosexuals can now get married. So today there are families of homosexuals. It’s great !
Merci d’avance
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-09-2019 20:29
Réponse : Expression écrite/correction de laure95, postée le 01-10-2019 à 10:02:24 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Families who changed (pas le bon temps, regarde la question) since 1945, are shocked by the war. So the Unated (faute de frappe?)Nation was creat (participe passé) and after the European Union was creat (même chose) for (pour: for + nom, to + verbe)have peace. Next, the (pas de the) new technologies appear (présent perfect), for instance the Mobil(e) phone.
So all this has made that families changed (mal construit). The situation of women in (article)society have (faute de conjugaison) changed, now there are not only house wife (en un seul mot + à mettre au pluriel), but also house husbands. The (pas de the) people are more open minded. Homosexuals can now get married. So today there are families of homosexuals. It’s great !
Réponse : Expression écrite/correction de fannyb, postée le 02-10-2019 à 23:56:43 (S | E)
Bonsoir
Families who have changed since 1945, are shocked by the war. So the United Nation was created and after the European Union was created to have peace. Next, new technologies have appeared , for instance the Mobile phone.
So, all this makes families changed . The situation of women in the society has changed, now there are not only housewifes , but also house husbands. People are more open minded. Homosexuals can now get married. So today there are families of homosexuals. It’s great !
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