Essay/ past tense

Essay/ past tense
Message from sandze123 posted on 30-07-2019 at 09:13:02 (D | E | F)
Hello,
Please can you guys check my essay?
Thanks for any reply.
I woke up at 8 o’clock yesterday. It was a little bit late than my usual routine. I straightly went to the bathroom and had bathed. When I reached at the kitchen my mom had already prepared breakfast for me. I ate breakfast with mom. After that i was ready for my job. Due to my car had broked last night I should catch the bus . The bus had just left the stop when I arrived. I had been waiting for next bus for half an hour. It was already late for my job. In the mean time my friend was going that way so i called and asked for help, but he refused because he was going to pick her mom from city. Finally, one last bus came and I went to the job. When I reached my boss had already left the office. I had been working there for 8 hours without break before I went home.

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Edited by lucile83 on 30-07-2019 11:07

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Re: Essay/ past tense from traviskidd, posted on 30-07-2019 at 14:53:06 (D | E)
Hello.

-straightly immediately, straightaway()
-went into the bathroom ("to go to the bathroom" means to use the toilet)
-had bathed (wrong tense, also "bathe" is too formal, use "take/have a bath")
-Due to + noun (gerund)
-should = devrais, you want devais
-had been waiting (wrong tense)
-meantime (one word)
-he was going to pick (particle) her (whose?) mom
-reached arrived, got there
-had been working (wrong tense)

See you.

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Re: Essay/ past tense from lucile83, posted on 30-07-2019 at 16:28:34 (D | E)
Hello,
... so i called... we write I, not i

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