Correction/7 phrases
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Message de ckenymis posté le 01-05-2019 à 01:14:18 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Can you check if these sentences are correct, please ?
Thank you
1) It is much faster than your mobile phone, the battery could be full in only 30 minutes.
2) It is as light as a simple headset, it makes you review memories with more details than a simple photograph.
3) The price won't excess 105 euros.
4) We are the only ones on the market to propose you this kind of product, other compagnies are completely lagged compared to us.
5) It is very fragile and should be kept clean or it could deteriorate the operation (le bon fonctionnement de l'appareil)
6) You don't have to worry about the remaining time before the batterie is out, a buzzer warns you 10 minutes before it stops.
7) You could bang on the furniture of your house.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-05-2019 08:24
Message de ckenymis posté le 01-05-2019 à 01:14:18 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Can you check if these sentences are correct, please ?
Thank you
1) It is much faster than your mobile phone, the battery could be full in only 30 minutes.
2) It is as light as a simple headset, it makes you review memories with more details than a simple photograph.
3) The price won't excess 105 euros.
4) We are the only ones on the market to propose you this kind of product, other compagnies are completely lagged compared to us.
5) It is very fragile and should be kept clean or it could deteriorate the operation (le bon fonctionnement de l'appareil)
6) You don't have to worry about the remaining time before the batterie is out, a buzzer warns you 10 minutes before it stops.
7) You could bang on the furniture of your house.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-05-2019 08:24
Réponse : Correction/7 phrases de gerondif, postée le 01-05-2019 à 11:53:37 (S | E)
Bonjour
1) It(quoi ?) is much faster than your mobile phone, the battery could(pourquoi un conditionnel qui ôte de la crédibilté au produit) be full(fully charged) in only 30 minutes.
2) It is as light as a simple headset, it makes you review memories with more details than a simple photograph.
3) The price won't excess(est un nom, exceed un verbe) 105 euros.
4) We are the only ones on the market to propose you(maladroit) to propose to offer tout seul) this kind of product, other compagnies are completely lagged compared to us.
5) It is very fragile and should be kept clean (if not, itt may not work properly)or it could deteriorate the operation (bof)(le bon fonctionnement de l'appareil)
6) You don't have to worry about the remaining time before the batterie(battery) is out(fait un peu français traduit, you needn"t worry about how much time you've got left before the battery goes out), a buzzer warns you 10 minutes before it stops.
7) You could bang it on the furniture of your house.
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