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Message de tangerois posté le 24-04-2019 à 19:17:26 (S | E | F)
Dear Friends, Hello,
I need your help in order to correct an official email before I send it.
Below is the email, thanks in advance !
"Dear X,
I hope this email finds you well
I am emailing you to inquire about the BV-S SCHOLARSHIP PROGRAM.
As I have notice on your website that you don't award this scholarship in advance but as an international student who needs the scholarship certificate for the visa purpose I was wondering if you could provide this certificate for student who got admitted to the university of Barcelona or it is only possible to apply for it after arriving and officially enrolled into the university.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Kind regards
My name"
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Modifié par webmaster le 24-04-2019 19:20
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-04-2019 21:34
Message de tangerois posté le 24-04-2019 à 19:17:26 (S | E | F)
I need your help in order to correct an official email before I send it.
Below is the email, thanks in advance !
"Dear X,
I hope this email finds you well
I am emailing you to inquire about the BV-S SCHOLARSHIP PROGRAM.
As I have notice on your website that you don't award this scholarship in advance but as an international student who needs the scholarship certificate for the visa purpose I was wondering if you could provide this certificate for student who got admitted to the university of Barcelona or it is only possible to apply for it after arriving and officially enrolled into the university.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Kind regards
My name"
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Modifié par webmaster le 24-04-2019 19:20
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-04-2019 21:34
Réponse : Need help/mail de gerondif, postée le 24-04-2019 à 19:59:27 (S | E)
Hello
If you are writing to a professor at university in charge of registration, it is official and I don't think that "I hope this email finds you well" is very formal. I would do without.
"Dear X,
I hope this email finds you well.
I am emailing you to inquire about the BV-S SCHOLARSHIP PROGRAM.
As(to be suppressed) I have notice(past participle) on your website that you don't award this scholarship in advance(fullstop)
Looking forward to hearing from you soon(may sound too pressing).
Kind regards (too familiar after the formal line above. to be suppressed)
My name"
Réponse : Need help/mail de tangerois, postée le 25-04-2019 à 02:08:23 (S | E)
Thank you so much Mr. Gerondif, I do appreciate your effort !
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