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Message de spooky10 posté le 14-02-2019 à 22:09:07 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
En prévision de mon écrit d'anglais j'ai préparé un texte; j'aimerais de l'aide pour le corriger si possible.
Merci d'avance.
Mark met the court again and Mark again refused to answer the judge questions . Then de recording of the journalist was played, the court heard Muldano speak of killing Mark so the judge returned Mark in his custody but Mark was a plan for leave his room. First of all he ran around his room until his heart was going very fast when Doreeen came back and saw Mark, he called the ambulance . Finally when mark saw he was alone he leave his bed and called at reggie .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-02-2019 22:22
Message de spooky10 posté le 14-02-2019 à 22:09:07 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
En prévision de mon écrit d'anglais j'ai préparé un texte; j'aimerais de l'aide pour le corriger si possible.
Merci d'avance.
Mark met the court again and Mark again refused to answer the judge questions . Then de recording of the journalist was played, the court heard Muldano speak of killing Mark so the judge returned Mark in his custody but Mark was a plan for leave his room. First of all he ran around his room until his heart was going very fast when Doreeen came back and saw Mark, he called the ambulance . Finally when mark saw he was alone he leave his bed and called at reggie .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-02-2019 22:22
Réponse : Ecrit /correction de laure95, postée le 15-02-2019 à 15:23:57 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Mark met the court again and Mark again refused to answer the judge (il manque la marque de la possession) questions . Then de
recording of the journalist was played, the court heard Muldano speak (gérondif)of killing Mark so the judge returned Mark in his custody but Mark was a plan for leave (pour + verbe = to) his room. First of all he ran around his room until his heart was going (preterit simple)very fast when Doreeen came back and saw Mark, he (ce n'est pas plutôt Doreen qui appelle une ambulance?) called the ambulance . Finally when mark saw he was alone he leave (preterit) his bed and called at reggie Réponse : Ecrit /correction de spooky10, postée le 20-02-2019 à 18:45:08 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup de l aide !!
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