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Message de fingerpost posté le 03-02-2019 à 12:25:37 (S | E | F)
Good morning.
Please let me know if this is correct.
Thanks in advance.
I did not know the Scotts for long before they took me away. In fact I only met them once before.
The moment l laid eyes on Mrs Scott she made my stomach churn .If I was apprehensive about her it was the opposite feeling for the affable M Scott who made a fuss of me.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-02-2019 14:32
Message de fingerpost posté le 03-02-2019 à 12:25:37 (S | E | F)
Good morning.
Please let me know if this is correct.
Thanks in advance.
I did not know the Scotts for long before they took me away. In fact I only met them once before.
The moment l laid eyes on Mrs Scott she made my stomach churn .If I was apprehensive about her it was the opposite feeling for the affable M Scott who made a fuss of me.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-02-2019 14:32
Réponse : Paragraphe/aide de laure95, postée le 04-02-2019 à 18:32:31 (S | E)
Good evening,
I did not know the Scotts for long (not the good tense: you have to use the past perfect) before they took me away. In fact I only met them once before.(the same remark)
The moment l laid (you have to add a possessive adjective)eyes on Mrs Scott she made my stomach churn .If I was apprehensive about her it was the opposite feeling for the affable M Scott who made a fuss of me.
Réponse : Paragraphe/aide de fingerpost, postée le 04-02-2019 à 19:04:09 (S | E)
Merci bien
Voici les corrections
I had not known....
I had only met them once before...
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