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Message de fl0rie posté le 27-11-2018 à 19:32:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Auriez-vous du temps libre s'il vous plait pour corriger notre lettre de premier contact avec une famille d'accueil.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Dear Mr,
We are a young french couple. Our names are Florie and Nicolas. We are 21 years old.
Together we have a degree of landscaping.
After Florie has a degree of agronomy crop production and Nicolas did some study of land surveyor. During our studies we did different internship, Florie workeed in a landscaping business to make garden creation and maintenance. She worked also with wine technicien, during 3 months.
Nicolas have make an internship in a biological golf to make the maintenance and he made too a work expereience in a landscaping business. For the study of land surveyor Nicolas has made a training period for 2 months in surveyor's office.
For the summer we worked in the apple and corn field. Florie did silo receptionist.
Currently Florie work in the printing press and Nicolas work in a supermarket.
We want to travel to see other horizons, learn about new cultures and practice in agriculture.
Since his degree of agronomy crop production Florie wishes to discover different alternative farming.
We are motivated and serious.
Manual work does not scare us.
We chose an English speaking country to improve our English which is very academic.
Your project interest us and we will be happy to help you from the beginning of january. If you need any further information, feel free.
Cheers
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-11-2018 23:01
Message de fl0rie posté le 27-11-2018 à 19:32:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Auriez-vous du temps libre s'il vous plait pour corriger notre lettre de premier contact avec une famille d'accueil.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Dear Mr,
We are a young french couple. Our names are Florie and Nicolas. We are 21 years old.
Together we have a degree of landscaping.
After Florie has a degree of agronomy crop production and Nicolas did some study of land surveyor. During our studies we did different internship, Florie workeed in a landscaping business to make garden creation and maintenance. She worked also with wine technicien, during 3 months.
Nicolas have make an internship in a biological golf to make the maintenance and he made too a work expereience in a landscaping business. For the study of land surveyor Nicolas has made a training period for 2 months in surveyor's office.
For the summer we worked in the apple and corn field. Florie did silo receptionist.
Currently Florie work in the printing press and Nicolas work in a supermarket.
We want to travel to see other horizons, learn about new cultures and practice in agriculture.
Since his degree of agronomy crop production Florie wishes to discover different alternative farming.
We are motivated and serious.
Manual work does not scare us.
We chose an English speaking country to improve our English which is very academic.
Your project interest us and we will be happy to help you from the beginning of january. If you need any further information, feel free.
Cheers
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-11-2018 23:01
Réponse : Letter woofing/aide de bluestar, postée le 28-11-2018 à 14:13:20 (S | E)
bonjour...
erreurs en bleu, quelques suggestions en vert
Dear Mr,
We are a young french(majuscule) couple. Our names are Florie and Nicolas. We are 21 years old.
After Florie has took a degree of in agronomy crop production and Nicolas did some study of land surveyor(verbe-ing). During our studies we did different internships, Florie workeed in a landscaping business
Nicolas have make an internship in a
biological golf to make the maintenance and he made too a work expereience in a landscaping business. For the study of land surveyor(verbe-ing) Nicolas has made a training period for 2 months in surveyor's office.For the summer we worked in the apple orchards and corn fields. Florie did worked as a silo receptionist.
Currently Florie work (conjugaison) in the printing press and Nicolas work (conjugaison) in a supermarket.
We want to travel to see other horizons, learn about new cultures and practice in agriculture.
Since his degree of agronomy crop production Florie wishes to discover("explore" serait mieux)
We are motivated and serious.
Manual work does not scare us.
We chose an English speaking country to improve our English which is very academic.
Your project interest(conjugaison) us and we will be happy to help you from the beginning of january(majuscule). If you need any further information, feel free to ask us.
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