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Description/pub
Message de serendipity posté le 07-11-2018 à 11:40:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je suis une élève de Terminale et j'aimerais bien, si possible, avoir des avis sur la description que l'on doit faire d'une pub.
Merci pour vos réponses.

"This document is an ad for a xxx food processor, it shows a couple, they seem happy. The woman is wearing a chef's hat to show that she's the one who cook, it's a cliché. She's wearing lipstick, her nails and her make up are done, she has to be beautiful when she's cooking. She's leaning against her husband, who is wearing a suit and a tie, it shows that women need men to have a great life. This ad is sexist, the catchphrase is saying "Xxx" it means that women are only good at cooking and their place is in the kichen. The slogan and the adress coupon are saying that the husband can give this mixer to his wife but she can't afford it alone, without his consent, the wife has to ask him to offer her it, for his personal comfort."

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Modifié par webmaster le 07-11-2018 11:50
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-11-2018 11:55

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Réponse : Description/pub de laure95, postée le 07-11-2018 à 15:50:41 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- it shows: ou it represents.
- she's the one who cook (faute de conjugaison)
- She's wearing lipstick: mal dit.
- when she's cooking: moi je mettrais le présent simple (habitude).
- it shows that women need men to have a great life: vague, préciser votre pesnée.
- the catchphrase is saying "Xxx": une personne dit quelque chose pas un slogan.
- it means that women are only good at cooking and their place (pluriel) is (pluriel) in the kichen.
- the adress coupon : ?
- are saying that: voir plus haut.
- the husband can give (donner? ou offrir?)this mixer to his wife
- the wife has to ask him to offer her it, for his (son confort à lui ou à elle?)personal comfort."

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Réponse : Description/pub de serendipity, postée le 07-11-2018 à 16:11:42 (S | E)
Bonjour,
This document is an ad for a xxx food processor, it shows a couple, they seem happy. The woman is wearing a chef's hat to show that she's the one who cooks , it's a cliché. She's wearing lipstick, her nails and her make up are done, she has to be beautiful when she's cooks . She's leaning against her husband, who is wearing a suit and a tie, it shows that women need men to have a great life, she needs him to take care of her . This ad is sexist, the catchphrase is saying "Xxx" (désolé pour les x a la base j'avais écrit la phrase mais on me l'a modifié) it means that women are only good at cooking and their places are in the kichen. The slogan and the adress coupon (sur le document il y a un coupon et notre professeure nous a dit de le dire comme ça) say that the husband can give (offrir mais je ne voulais pas utiliser 2 fois le même mot, ça marche quand même?) this mixer to his wife but she can't afford it alone, without his consent, the wife has to ask him to offer her it, for his (le confort de son mari) personal comfort.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-11-2018 21:33
Pas de rouge sur le forum, merci.

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Réponse : Description/pub de laure95, postée le 07-11-2018 à 16:43:29 (S | E)
- she's cooks: mal conjugué au présent simple.
- it shows: cela fait la 2è fois que tu emploies ce verbe, cherche un synonyme.
- she's wearinh lipstick: she has some lipstick.
- the catchphrase is saying "Xxx": tu ne peux pas utiliser ici le verbe "to say" car le sujet n'est pas une personne.
- The slogan and the adress coupon (sur le document il y a un coupon et notre professeure nous a dit de le dire comme ça); OK
- say: même remarque.
- that the husband can give (offrir mais je ne voulais pas utiliser 2 fois le même mot, ça marche quand même?): that the husband can afford this mixer to her because as she can't (et tu enlèves afford it alone)
- the (mettre le possessif à la place de the) wife has to ask him to offer her it, for his (le confort de son mari) personal comfort: ok.

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Réponse : Description/pub de serendipity, postée le 08-11-2018 à 18:23:52 (S | E)
This document is an ad for a xxx food processor, it shows a couple, they seem happy. The woman is wearing a chef's hat to show that she's the one who cooks , it's a cliché. She has some lipstick, her nails and her make up are done, she has to be beautiful when she cooks . She's leaning against her husband, who is wearing a suit and a tie, it displays that women need men to have a great life, she needs him to take care of her . This ad is sexist, the catchphrase is reading "Xxx" it means that women are only good at cooking and their places are in the kichen. The slogan and the adress coupon read that the husband can afford this mixer to her because as she can't, without his consent, the wife has to ask him to offer her it, for his personal comfort.

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Réponse : Description/pub de laure95, postée le 08-11-2018 à 18:47:27 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
- women need men to have a great life: c'est vague!Que voulez-vous dire par " a great life"?
- the catchphrase is reading "Xxx": we can read on the catchphrase XXX.
- The slogan and the adress coupon read: the slogan and the adress coupon mean
- because as she can't: choisir entre because et as (ici, synonymes)

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Réponse : Description/pub de serendipity, postée le 08-11-2018 à 19:08:43 (S | E)
Bonsoir et merci pour votre aide, en fait puisque sur l'image la femme est appuyée contre mari je voulais dire que c'est comme si elle avait besoin de lui pour être bien (enfin c'est ce qu'elle croit) ou un truc comme ça mais peut être que je cherche une signification la où il n'y en a pas...

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